"they" must be capitalized because it is the beginning of a new sentence. (4 points)
http://spartandaily.com/60399/the-san-jose-state-marching-band-wows-on-the-field
In the first paragraph it says "an original eight- to 10-minute set."
It should be 8 to 10-minute set. (2 points)
This brochure says "premium luxury makes."
It should be "premium luxury models." (4 points)
This flyer says "firewoks."
It should say "fireworks." (4 points)
http://spartandaily.com/60225/coach-mac-corner-fresno-st
-The Spartans will take on the Fresno State Bulldogs at Bulldog Stadium on Saturday, a game that MacIntyre admitted is a big rivalry game for SJSU.
-It should say "at the Bulldog Stadium" (2 points)
http://spartandaily.com/61213/aerobicthon-jazzercisin-up-success
-Over 200 participants from SJSU and the wider community fell in line to put their bodies through the 15 minute aerobic routines which included Zumba, kickboxing, Bollywood bhangra, hip-hop dance and Jazzercise.
-It should be "15-minute" (2 points)
http://spartandaily.com/60852/relationship-story
-Relationships are the bread and butter that keeps people whole and together – we wouldn’t be who we are without them.
-Keeps should be keep (2 points)
Same source above.
-Junior biology major Katie Allen said the romance isn’t as abundant as her and her boyfriend would like because of their busy schedules but they realize school is important, as is his job and taking care of their 8-month old.
- 8-month old should be 8-month-old. (2 points)
